बाँकी सबै गए
आफ्नै बाटो खोज्दै,
नाङ्गो आँगनमा एक्ली
कुप्री बुढी जस्तै,
चिउडोमा हात राखी -
फर्की आउछन् कि भन्दै
एउटै सपना बुन्दै
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bichitra
मायाको छैन रिस्तेदार न रुपै छ यो भ्रमको नरहेछ माया त्यो जुन तिमि होला भन्थेउ साचो माया धेरै टाढा जो आफै देखि भाग्दैछ देखिने देखाउने द...
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A body needs foods to survive. our destiny needs thoughts to be written in peaceful state. Thinking thoughts is hectic but thinking a t... -
बाँकी सबै गए आफ्नै बाटो खोज्दै, नाङ्गो आँगनमा एक्ली कुप्री बुढी जस्तै, चिउडोमा हात राखी - फर्की आउछन् कि भन्दै एउटै सपना ...
jiwan sapana sabai nai buna
ReplyDeletekehi pal mai udridai jana suru garnaycha
sarir ra dhago galdai
sabai nildai janaycha
aas ma
pyas ma
pheri bunaychau
tadpinchau
tadpanchau
kehi payo jasto lagcha
tara pheri bilauchau
tyo sangai harauna kojchau
tara timi afanai bunaima badiykochau
udarda afai sabai udrina thalcha
daar lay pheri bunna thalchau
rati ko 3 bajay lekayko sorryy
Thank you for posting. Ramro cha.
Deleteabout the poem I was going to sleep then the idea came up then got up and started writing also that 'Bilauchau was suppose to be Bilaucha' Not the best thinker late night.
DeleteSome of your writings are very very good Very artistic well your pictures are artistic too but still well you get that compliment a lot i guess.
also about the compliment part that one does seem forced hai have to work on that but yes you good Honestly you are.
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